No.1 Le Ha N
The substance of this story is very clear and orderly, which I can have a clear idea of this story. Although the beginning of this story is commonly just as what happened in our daily life, I was smile after I read because of the surprised ending. And more, the most attractive point is that this story has the real emotion, which I can feel the same feeling with the writer.( may be because I am a international student too, I like this story more than others)
No.2 Brune Laci L
The best bright spot of this story is that it is filled with subtle and refined sentiment, which can let me taste this story slightly, specially the words. Furthermore, the writer connect all the inventories in a very sweet way that with memory. However, if writer can separate the whole story into different paragraphs, there will be better.
No. 3 Schleif Emily A
This story is especially attractive and gives me a different feeling compared to others, because it is a strange dream. Writer describes the surroundings detailedly, at the beginning, the fevered circumstance catches me a lot, which let me want to read more to know what will happen next. In a word, writer successfully describes the strange situation and uses all the inventories, it's really good.
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